Eyes full of tears, a soul full of fears,
Even a calm wind makes you shiver
like if you were in the south pole.
Desolation, Sadness and anger
that made your heart
transform into a cold and hard stone.
Your Face is as pale as the snow
although you are trying to hide the pain
from the world that made you suffer,
but your eyes betray you, they show your pain.
So, Yo might be wondering,
Why do they bother?
Why they don't understand,
the theres no one that
can understand what will be happening next?
What happens is , that there's a part of you
that still have faith.
But.. faith in what?
faith in a world where there is no inocence left?
faith in a place where money and benefit are first
and friendship and respect aren't there?
faith in a world where violence and hate are easy to find
but love and peace are hard to keep?
faith in a place that kills an innocent creature, for justice?
That faith doesn't disappears,
is like a stubborn kid,
but it doens't matter,
that faith won't be with you for a long time
***
You just need one step,
to end with all this pain,
you just need one more step,
and your eyes wont betray you again
Just one single step,
and that useless and stubborn faith,
will dissapear
You are in the border of a cliff
some tears leaves your eyes
and rolls down your cheeks.
You actually don't know if you are crying
because you are happy or sad.
You don't know
you know that
you are going to leave
this horrible place
that made you suffer
like if you weren't a
human with feelings.
You take your last breathe
take that last step,
and welcome with open arms
the loving embrace of death
PD: Actualizado :roll: 43 apodos
Even a calm wind makes you shiver
like if you were in the south pole.
Desolation, Sadness and anger
that made your heart
transform into a cold and hard stone.
Your Face is as pale as the snow
although you are trying to hide the pain
from the world that made you suffer,
but your eyes betray you, they show your pain.
So, Yo might be wondering,
Why do they bother?
Why they don't understand,
the theres no one that
can understand what will be happening next?
What happens is , that there's a part of you
that still have faith.
But.. faith in what?
faith in a world where there is no inocence left?
faith in a place where money and benefit are first
and friendship and respect aren't there?
faith in a world where violence and hate are easy to find
but love and peace are hard to keep?
faith in a place that kills an innocent creature, for justice?
That faith doesn't disappears,
is like a stubborn kid,
but it doens't matter,
that faith won't be with you for a long time
***
You just need one step,
to end with all this pain,
you just need one more step,
and your eyes wont betray you again
Just one single step,
and that useless and stubborn faith,
will dissapear
You are in the border of a cliff
some tears leaves your eyes
and rolls down your cheeks.
You actually don't know if you are crying
because you are happy or sad.
You don't know
you know that
you are going to leave
this horrible place
that made you suffer
like if you weren't a
human with feelings.
You take your last breathe
take that last step,
and welcome with open arms
the loving embrace of death
PD: Actualizado :roll: 43 apodos
5 comentarios:
*.* que mega wow
ME QUEDÉ SIN PALABRAS.
Besos y abrazos de wonejo,Carlos^^
WOW palomita!!!!!!!
k profundo!
me inspiraste! :P
pero wow!
en ingles!
me gusto mucho ,,, te quedo muy bn , me gusto en especial la ultima estrofa , hay es donde todo cae en su punto ,, me gusto ,,
palomaaa...tu estabas en depresion ese dia vdd?? :( .. pa hacer un poema suicida como ese hay q sentirse mal .. melancolicaa..q tu teniaas???
Aparte de esoo ta muy bien hecho ..m gusto de vdd
Yo no sabia k tu escribias tan bn....
wayyyyy. toddoo lo tuyo es suicidioooo !! demasiadoo REALISTAA XD HAHAHAHAHA ..
loka tu me va a traumarr
ponte algo alegre :P
O.O
el suicidio..
esa no es la salidaa!! OMG
al fin y al cabo, me gusto
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